Kanji and Kana2

Today. I try to write Kanji kana majiri style.
I wrote "Haru to shura" by Miyazawa Kenji.

「わたくしという現象は　仮定された有機交流電燈のひとつの青い照明です
あらゆる透明な幽霊複合体　風景やみんなといつしょに　せはしくせはしく明滅しながら
いかにもたしかにともりつづける　因果交流電燈の　ひとつの青い照明です
ひかりはたもち　その電燈は失はれ」　宮沢賢治「春と修羅　序」
 Here is a English translation of it.
 "The fhenomenon called I is a single blue illumination of a presupposed organic alternating current lamp The single illumination of karma's alternating current lamp Remains alight without fail Flicking unceasingly, restlessly Tpgether with the sights of the land and all else"